Pitching our polished ideas to Matt and Luke

At the beginning of this week in groups we were suppose to pitch our changed and developed ideas to Matt and Luke. 

We were thinking what we like most from our previous idea - we all agreed that we want to make interrogation of a girl as a leading theme. We wanted to set in the dark and creepy basement as a place of interrogation. Our plot is mainly based on young girl being questioned by two bad guys. They want to know information about a man that they are looking for. The audience won't know who the girl is for the wanted man. She refuses to answer any questions, male characters are getting really annoyed at her so every time when she is not answering they beat her. At some point they decide to walk outside to get a bucket of water and a towel for the use of torture. As soon as they get back inside the window is opened and the girl is gone.