Gabi - a good structure to your response, but the presentation needs developing. You need to insert evidence of the feedback - if possible. You also need to draw upon specific audience comment. You could have used evidence from the You Tube stats. Once this feedback has been presented you can then develop your answer further - what have I learned.
Gabi - a good structure to your response, but the presentation needs developing. You need to insert evidence of the feedback - if possible. You also need to draw upon specific audience comment. You could have used evidence from the You Tube stats. Once this feedback has been presented you can then develop your answer further - what have I learned.
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